When I had this story all wrote down on paper, I gave it to Scoop Ellery and said: "You take it home and read it and see if I've left out anything." Scoop, who is my pal and shared in the adventure, read the story and said: "No, Jerry, I don't think you've left out a thing. I like the way you tell the story, too. That part where the mummy whispers is spooky and shivery; and there's a lot of fun and oodles of mystery. Yes," he added, wanting to hand me a little praise for the work I had done, "it's a pretty slick story, and I bet you that boys who like to get hold of a good book will eat it up."